Talk:Schröder-Bernstein theorem/Draft

"Details": "the induced induced image"? Boris Tsirelson 06:29, 26 September 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. Corrected. --Peter Schmitt 12:26, 28 September 2010 (UTC)

"Proof:Proof":

$S_{1}\subset S\subset A\Rightarrow f_{\ast }(S_{1})\subset f_{\ast }(S)$

probably should be

$S_{1}\subset S\subset A\Rightarrow \sigma _{\ast }(S_{1})\subset \sigma _{\ast }(S)$

Oops -- correct but not what is needed. --Peter Schmitt 23:37, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

"Monotone" in general may be understood as "either increasing or decreasing"; it is meant "(momotonely) increasing" or "isotone".

Yes, that was negligent. --Peter Schmitt 23:37, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

"Proof:Proof":

"By assumption, there are injective functions (...) that induce..."

I'd say

"By assumption, there are injective functions (...); they induce..."

because the second part of the phrase is not a part of the assumption (but its consequence).

True -- that is better. --Peter Schmitt 23:37, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

"Outline": the reader can guess what is denoted by f and g (or see the details), but we'd better let him know.

I forgot that I did not introduce it before. --Peter Schmitt 23:37, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

"Details": probably also (4) is needed, explaining what are A₂, B₁ and B₂ (which is easy) and why B₁ is the image of A₁ under f and A₂ is the image of B₂ under g (which is less easy).

I was lazy -- I thought this is "obvious". --Peter Schmitt 23:37, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

Boris Tsirelson 12:19, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

Done. Thanks. --Peter Schmitt 23:37, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

It seems, some new "decreasing" should rather be "increasing". Boris Tsirelson 13:18, 6 October 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. My only excuse is that it was very late and the mental image was the decreasing sequence produced by σ starting at A. --Peter Schmitt 09:14, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

More remarks

"Outline": "This defines a mapping of subsets of A to subsets of A that is monotone" — rather, increasing.

"Details": "(2) σ is a monotone function" — rather, increasing.

"Details": "$A_{2}:=A\setminus A_{2}$" — rather, $A\setminus A_{1}$.

"Details": "that has the desired properties:" — either a continuation will follow, or the colon should be a fullstop.

Done. --Peter Schmitt 23:52, 13 October 2010 (UTC)

In addition, some commas and fullstops after displays are missing. Boris Tsirelson 17:33, 12 October 2010 (UTC)

This is purpose. I know that it typographically it is not correct. But I find both versions (punctuation inside or outside the display) irritating. I tried to avoid this situation but haven't always. I am not sure what to do ... --Peter Schmitt 23:52, 13 October 2010 (UTC)

Toward approval

Nominated. Boris Tsirelson 08:49, 14 October 2010 (UTC)

This article is about the Schröder-Bernstein theorem, yet I can't help noticing the lack of either Schröder or Bernstein in the text. Presumably that refers to two people who "discovered" this or however you put it, so there must be some element of history in there that is lacking in the article itself. The Schröder-Bernstein property article is the same - lots about what it is, none about where it came from or how it got named. David Finn 09:46, 14 October 2010 (UTC)

You are right, David, and I am currently researching what is known about the history. I agree that, in general, it is nice to have a historical section but, on the other hand, missing it is not a crucial gap if the mathematical treatment is adequate. In any case, I think it is better to have nothing on the history than something superficial and incomplete. --Peter Schmitt 13:06, 14 October 2010 (UTC)

Peter, don't you think that an article to be approved should have at least one reference? Milton Beychok 17:53, 14 October 2010 (UTC)