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[[User:Mary Ash|Mary Ash]] 04:50, 26 July 2010 (UTC)Mary | ==Removed a section== | ||
Removed the section about the 1950 Betty Crocker Picture Cook Book as there was no photo of ++ | |||
Betty in that edition. I checked my old cookbooks and it's the 1956 edition that Betty's face is seen smiling. I will try to add that information later. [[User:Mary Ash|Mary Ash]] 04:50, 26 July 2010 (UTC) | |||
==The two references need to be worked over== | |||
Mary, I have not made any revisions or relocation, but you should be aware: | |||
* The hyperlink for the second "reference", http://adage.com/century/icon04.html/topic , does not work. All I get is a "Not found" error. | |||
* A hyperlink to an online website, a book citation or a journal citation is not a "reference" (or a "note") unless it is tied to a specific word or sentence in the article by a number such as <sup>[1]</sup>. If it doesn't to that, then it is either a "Bibliography" item or an "External Links" item and should be moved to those subpages. | |||
After you correct the hyperlink that does not work, if you want the two references to be tied to some specific words or specific sentences in the article so that they are truly '''references''', then please respond here and tell me where you want them to be tied to, and I will do that for you and do it in the correct reference format. If you do not want to tie them to specific words or sentences, then let me know that and I will transfer them to the "External Links" subpage for you. | |||
I will await your reply. When you reply, all you need (as the first one to reply) is one colon (:) to indent your reply correctly and you do not need to add your name after the four tildes ([[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 05:13, 26 July 2010 (UTC)) because the tildes automatically sign and date your posting. If someone else replies before you do and uses one colon, then as the second replier you use two colons (::). [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 05:13, 26 July 2010 (UTC) | |||
Revision as of 23:13, 25 July 2010
Removed a section
Removed the section about the 1950 Betty Crocker Picture Cook Book as there was no photo of ++ Betty in that edition. I checked my old cookbooks and it's the 1956 edition that Betty's face is seen smiling. I will try to add that information later. Mary Ash 04:50, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
The two references need to be worked over
Mary, I have not made any revisions or relocation, but you should be aware:
- The hyperlink for the second "reference", http://adage.com/century/icon04.html/topic , does not work. All I get is a "Not found" error.
- A hyperlink to an online website, a book citation or a journal citation is not a "reference" (or a "note") unless it is tied to a specific word or sentence in the article by a number such as [1]. If it doesn't to that, then it is either a "Bibliography" item or an "External Links" item and should be moved to those subpages.
After you correct the hyperlink that does not work, if you want the two references to be tied to some specific words or specific sentences in the article so that they are truly references, then please respond here and tell me where you want them to be tied to, and I will do that for you and do it in the correct reference format. If you do not want to tie them to specific words or sentences, then let me know that and I will transfer them to the "External Links" subpage for you.
I will await your reply. When you reply, all you need (as the first one to reply) is one colon (:) to indent your reply correctly and you do not need to add your name after the four tildes (Milton Beychok 05:13, 26 July 2010 (UTC)) because the tildes automatically sign and date your posting. If someone else replies before you do and uses one colon, then as the second replier you use two colons (::). Milton Beychok 05:13, 26 July 2010 (UTC)