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== My review up to now == | |||
At this time, I reviewed this [[Littoral Combat Ship]] article about as much as I want to review it until more is added to it. At this point, I don't think of anything to add about [[anti-submarine warfare]] to this article. My comment at this point is that in the "New procurement approach" section at the current end, the clause "fixed-price contract to each company to build one apiece of their ships through 2015." is not exactly clear to me. I would like to see that sentence rewritten in a clear, understandable way; one apiece "each year" through 2015 ??. [[User:Henry A. Padleckas|Henry A. Padleckas]] 05:42, 23 February 2011 (UTC) |
Latest revision as of 23:42, 22 February 2011
My review up to now
At this time, I reviewed this Littoral Combat Ship article about as much as I want to review it until more is added to it. At this point, I don't think of anything to add about anti-submarine warfare to this article. My comment at this point is that in the "New procurement approach" section at the current end, the clause "fixed-price contract to each company to build one apiece of their ships through 2015." is not exactly clear to me. I would like to see that sentence rewritten in a clear, understandable way; one apiece "each year" through 2015 ??. Henry A. Padleckas 05:42, 23 February 2011 (UTC)