Talk:London, United Kingdom: Difference between revisions

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:I plan to continue with the work started by Russell Potter, and for that purpose I have set up a framework of paragraphs into which I plan to transfer and develop the existing text. I have added a timelines subpage with the attention of creating the foundation of the history paragraph. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 08:44, 9 March 2012 (UTC)
:I plan to continue with the work started by Russell Potter, and for that purpose I have set up a framework of paragraphs into which I plan to transfer and develop the existing text. I have added a timelines subpage with the attention of creating the foundation of the history paragraph. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 08:44, 9 March 2012 (UTC)
::I have made minimal changes to the lede because I intend to rewrite it completely when I have finished with the other paragraphs. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 16:01, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
::I have made minimal changes to the lede because I intend to rewrite it completely when I have finished with the other paragraphs. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 16:01, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
== Completion of a framework ==
I believe the revised article to be complete in the sense of establishing a basic factual framework, but I should welcome suggestions concerning possible improvements because I do not consider that it is yet suitable for approval. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 11:19, 14 March 2012 (UTC)

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 Definition:  Capital city of the United Kingdom (pop. 7,556,900). [d] [e]
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Fresh start

I'm hoping to kick off a fresh start on this important entry, not just a copy of the wikipedia. A few sentences of the second paragraph of the present text are adapted from the 11th edition of the Encyclopædia Britannica, a public-domain source. Russell Potter 10:48, 24 June 2007 (CDT)

I plan to continue with the work started by Russell Potter, and for that purpose I have set up a framework of paragraphs into which I plan to transfer and develop the existing text. I have added a timelines subpage with the attention of creating the foundation of the history paragraph. Nick Gardner 08:44, 9 March 2012 (UTC)
I have made minimal changes to the lede because I intend to rewrite it completely when I have finished with the other paragraphs. Nick Gardner 16:01, 13 March 2012 (UTC)

Completion of a framework

I believe the revised article to be complete in the sense of establishing a basic factual framework, but I should welcome suggestions concerning possible improvements because I do not consider that it is yet suitable for approval. Nick Gardner 11:19, 14 March 2012 (UTC)

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