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Nothing much to change if I am not mistaken. [[User:Thomas Simmons|Thomas Simmons]] 17:50, 16 March 2007 (CDT)
Nothing much to change if I am not mistaken. [[User:Thomas Simmons|Thomas Simmons]] 17:50, 16 March 2007 (CDT)
== Intro ==
Great content so far, but I'm wondering if the intro is a bit too chummy.  Would anyone object to making it a bit more academic? Blessings. --[[User:Michael J. Formica|Michael J. Formica]] 10:44, 5 November 2007 (CST)

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Please continue, Dawei. Excellent start. (applause from the grateful audience) Nancy Nancy Sculerati MD 08:51, 8 February 2007 (CST)

I do not know enough to know if you already have included this in one of the already written subheadings, but could you kindly add "Yoga as a healing art" to the article? This article will open up into several others, and at least one should go in that direction. Thanks, Nancy Nancy Sculerati MD 20:49, 8 February 2007 (CST)

Okay, will do. Thanks for the kind words! Bei Dawei

Big Clean-up

Nothing much to change if I am not mistaken. Thomas Simmons 17:50, 16 March 2007 (CDT)

Intro

Great content so far, but I'm wondering if the intro is a bit too chummy. Would anyone object to making it a bit more academic? Blessings. --Michael J. Formica 10:44, 5 November 2007 (CST)