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:: Then the explanation following it could have the heading "The general pattern" (or similar). For tactical reasons :-) I do not make changes myself. | :: Then the explanation following it could have the heading "The general pattern" (or similar). For tactical reasons :-) I do not make changes myself. | ||
:: --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 12:41, 28 September 2010 (UTC) | :: --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 12:41, 28 September 2010 (UTC) | ||
:::Being unsure I did the change in my sandbox; please look [[User:Boris Tsirelson/Sandbox1|there]]. Is it close to what you mean? [[User:Boris Tsirelson|Boris Tsirelson]] 13:48, 28 September 2010 (UTC) |
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Three remarks
Nice, Boris. I have only minor comments:
- I think the "noncommutative counterpart" needs some more explanation.
- What do you think of discussing the relation to antisymmetry of order?
- What about more structure by (sub)headings?
--Peter Schmitt 23:55, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- 1. "noncommutative counterpart" — on one hand, I am waiting for a book from our library about this point; but on the other hand, it is anyway beyond the form "If X is similar to a part of Y and also Y is similar to a part of X then X and Y are similar (to each other)" and only inspired by it.
- 2. "relation to antisymmetry of order" — you are right, this should be noted.
- 3. "structure by (sub)headings" — I also feel the need, but the article is so short, I do not see which headings; do you? Boris Tsirelson 06:23, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
- As for headings: "Examples" is obvious, I think.
- The introduction could say something like: "(Remark) In contrast to most mathematical terms this only gives the general form, the pattern, of a statement instead of a definite and precise definition."
- Then the explanation following it could have the heading "The general pattern" (or similar). For tactical reasons :-) I do not make changes myself.
- --Peter Schmitt 12:41, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
- Being unsure I did the change in my sandbox; please look there. Is it close to what you mean? Boris Tsirelson 13:48, 28 September 2010 (UTC)