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*[http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=Homeopathy&diff=100395513&oldid=100395423 13:22, 6 October 2008 Gareth Leng 17:45, 6 October 2008 D. Matt Innis] - D Matt Innis' edits were completely agreeable. | *[http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=Homeopathy&diff=100395513&oldid=100395423 13:22, 6 October 2008 Gareth Leng 17:45, 6 October 2008 D. Matt Innis] - D Matt Innis' edits were completely agreeable. | ||
* | *[http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=Homeopathy&diff=100395639&oldid=100395628 02:39, 7 October 2008 Howard C. Berkowitz 03:35, 7 October 2008 Dana Ullman] | ||
:*''"life energy," sometimes called a "vital force," which today is commonly referred to as a person's immune and defense system.'' - awkward grammar | |||
:*''Due to their respect for the wisdom of the body'' - ambiguous.... how can a body have "wisdom"? | |||
:*''small and specially prepared '' - unnecessary | |||
:*There was no reason to delete ''Again, mainstream medicine rejects this premise as unsupported by adequate [[clinical evidence]], [[molecular biology]], or both.'' | |||
:*''when considering homeopathy as an intervention, but may be used to determine the need for more conventional approaches.'' vs ''are generally not essential for selecting a homeopathic remedy, but may be used for medical disease diagnosis.'' - I find the original sentence more descriptive & sensible. "medical diesase diagnosis" is ambiguous. | |||
Revision as of 16:03, 14 November 2008
- 13:22, 6 October 2008 Gareth Leng 17:45, 6 October 2008 D. Matt Innis - D Matt Innis' edits were completely agreeable.
- 02:39, 7 October 2008 Howard C. Berkowitz 03:35, 7 October 2008 Dana Ullman
- "life energy," sometimes called a "vital force," which today is commonly referred to as a person's immune and defense system. - awkward grammar
- Due to their respect for the wisdom of the body - ambiguous.... how can a body have "wisdom"?
- small and specially prepared - unnecessary
- There was no reason to delete Again, mainstream medicine rejects this premise as unsupported by adequate clinical evidence, molecular biology, or both.
- when considering homeopathy as an intervention, but may be used to determine the need for more conventional approaches. vs are generally not essential for selecting a homeopathic remedy, but may be used for medical disease diagnosis. - I find the original sentence more descriptive & sensible. "medical diesase diagnosis" is ambiguous.