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I was one of the major contributors to the WP article. Before transferring it here into CZ, I have completely reformatted it, drawn some new diagrams and revised it to get rid of the usual Wikipedia revisions that, after time, degrade a WP article. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 19:08, 22 July 2008 (CDT) | I was one of the major contributors to the WP article. Before transferring it here into CZ, I have completely reformatted it, drawn some new diagrams and revised it to get rid of the usual Wikipedia revisions that, after time, degrade a WP article. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 19:08, 22 July 2008 (CDT) | ||
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Hi Milt, sorry for the delay. As one who is pretty familiar with the ideas behind alcohol distillation (because I thought I might try building a still after I got into home brewing) but unfamiliar with the distillation of any other substances or the equipment used to accomplish it, I find the article very clear on most points. I made one small style edit that you might want to check but otherwise I only have a few comments: | |||
#I didn't recognize the word "miscible" when I saw it in the first paragraph, though I figured it out further down. I think I would make it a wikilink, but I'm not sure where to point the link. | |||
#The references to FRI and its fields of research in the body of the article come off as somewhat off-topic. They might belong in footnotes or maybe the external links page. | |||
#The history section seems out of order. I'm not sure if I would put it at the top, but it doesn't seem to fit at the bottom. | |||
I hope this is helpful, [[User:Joe Quick|Joe Quick]] 00:04, 15 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
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I was one of the major contributors to the WP article. Before transferring it here into CZ, I have completely reformatted it, drawn some new diagrams and revised it to get rid of the usual Wikipedia revisions that, after time, degrade a WP article. Milton Beychok 19:08, 22 July 2008 (CDT)
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Hi Milt, sorry for the delay. As one who is pretty familiar with the ideas behind alcohol distillation (because I thought I might try building a still after I got into home brewing) but unfamiliar with the distillation of any other substances or the equipment used to accomplish it, I find the article very clear on most points. I made one small style edit that you might want to check but otherwise I only have a few comments:
- I didn't recognize the word "miscible" when I saw it in the first paragraph, though I figured it out further down. I think I would make it a wikilink, but I'm not sure where to point the link.
- The references to FRI and its fields of research in the body of the article come off as somewhat off-topic. They might belong in footnotes or maybe the external links page.
- The history section seems out of order. I'm not sure if I would put it at the top, but it doesn't seem to fit at the bottom.
I hope this is helpful, Joe Quick 00:04, 15 January 2009 (UTC)