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Here's an excellent opportunity to apply the principle that we should lead an article with an explanation of the reason the person is famous.  I might state that "He ordered the construction of the Great Pyramid at Giza" and "The Greeks named him Cheops" in the first couple of sentences.  However, I say this only as a rough guide--anyway, cf. [[CZ:Article Mechanics|Article Mechanics]]. --[[User:Larry Sanger|Larry Sanger]] 12:21, 29 March 2007 (CDT)
Here's an excellent opportunity to apply the principle that we should lead an article with an explanation of the reason the person is famous.  I might state that "He ordered the construction of the Great Pyramid at Giza" and "The Greeks named him Cheops" in the first couple of sentences.  However, I say this only as a rough guide--anyway, cf. [[CZ:Article Mechanics|Article Mechanics]]. --[[User:Larry Sanger|Larry Sanger]] 12:21, 29 March 2007 (CDT)
Hello Larry, thank you very much for your suggestion, I will put it into practice --[[User:José Leonardo Andrade|José Leonardo Andrade]] 16:40, 29 March 2007 (CDT)

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José, thanks for starting what is already a meaty article, from scratch!

Here's an excellent opportunity to apply the principle that we should lead an article with an explanation of the reason the person is famous. I might state that "He ordered the construction of the Great Pyramid at Giza" and "The Greeks named him Cheops" in the first couple of sentences. However, I say this only as a rough guide--anyway, cf. Article Mechanics. --Larry Sanger 12:21, 29 March 2007 (CDT)

Hello Larry, thank you very much for your suggestion, I will put it into practice --José Leonardo Andrade 16:40, 29 March 2007 (CDT)