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Also, if you want to include a footnote or a reference for one of your proposed edits to the [[Rudy Atallah]] article, please furnish the details of the footnote or reference ... rather than just "Insert footnote text here". Accordingly, I have removed reference 7 from the article. In any event, the slight edit that you made in the article really doesn't require a footnote or a reference. | Also, if you want to include a footnote or a reference for one of your proposed edits to the [[Rudy Atallah]] article, please furnish the details of the footnote or reference ... rather than just "Insert footnote text here". Accordingly, I have removed reference 7 from the article. In any event, the slight edit that you made in the article really doesn't require a footnote or a reference. | ||
Further, the first sentence of the article reads "'''Rudy Atallah''' is the Africa Counterterrorism director at the [[ | Further, the first sentence of the article reads "'''Rudy Atallah''' is the Africa Counterterrorism director at the [[U.S. Department of Defense]] ....". From the biography on your user page, it appears that you have retired from that position, so I have changed the word "is" to "was". | ||
Once again welcome from a fellow retiree. Regards, [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 17:57, 16 June 2011 (UTC) | Once again welcome from a fellow retiree. Regards, [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 17:57, 16 June 2011 (UTC) | ||
Latest revision as of 10:02, 7 March 2024
Welcome!
Welcome to Citizendium as a new author! We're very glad you've joined us. We hope you will contribute boldly and well. Here are pointers for a quick start. You'll probably also want to know how to get started as an author. Just look at Getting Started for other helpful "startup" pages, and at CZ:Home for a complete listing of help and other community pages. If you wish, just ask me to create a "personal sandbox" for you where you can test out editing and writing articles. If you need help to get going, it is a good idea to join our discussion forums. That's where we discuss policy, proposals or technical problems. You can ask any constable for help, too. Me, for instance! Just put a note on their "talk" page. Again, welcome and thank you! We appreciate your willingness to share your expertise, and we hope to see you begin actively editing and contributing to Citizendium. D. Matt Innis 12:35, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
About your edit of Rudy Atallah
Hello, Rudolph:
First, let me welcome you to Citizendium and I hope that you will enjoy your work here.
As Matt Innis (our Chief Constable) has already informed you, we frown upon anyone writing or editing an article about themselves. That is why he asked you to offer any proposed edits to the Rudy Atallah article on the Talk page of that article (i.e., Talk:Rudy Atallah) where any of us could then consider whether or not to implement the edits that you propose.
Also, if you want to include a footnote or a reference for one of your proposed edits to the Rudy Atallah article, please furnish the details of the footnote or reference ... rather than just "Insert footnote text here". Accordingly, I have removed reference 7 from the article. In any event, the slight edit that you made in the article really doesn't require a footnote or a reference.
Further, the first sentence of the article reads "Rudy Atallah is the Africa Counterterrorism director at the U.S. Department of Defense ....". From the biography on your user page, it appears that you have retired from that position, so I have changed the word "is" to "was".
Once again welcome from a fellow retiree. Regards, Milton Beychok 17:57, 16 June 2011 (UTC)