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== Approval of an updated version == | == Approval of an updated version == | ||
=== Author: [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] === | |||
These are the minor (almost trivial) changes made since the article was approved: | These are the minor (almost trivial) changes made since the article was approved: | ||
::(1) On Feb. 21, 2009; Apr. 17, 2010; and May 1, 2011, I added internal wiki links to other CZ articles. | ::(1) On Feb. 21, 2009; Apr. 17, 2010; and May 1, 2011, I added internal wiki links to other CZ articles. | ||
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::(3) On August 11, 2011, I replaced an inactive external hyper-link with an active one. | ::(3) On August 11, 2011, I replaced an inactive external hyper-link with an active one. | ||
::(4) On On Sept. 21, 2010, I improved the vapor pressure chart by placing small black circles on the chart to emphasize the boiling points. | ::(4) On On Sept. 21, 2010, I improved the vapor pressure chart by placing small black circles on the chart to emphasize the boiling points. | ||
::Then, a few day ago, I added the new photo of boiling water to the intro section. As you can see, all of my edits were very minor and trivial (in my opinion). [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 21:58, 12 December 2011 (UTC) | ::Then, a few day ago, I added the new photo of boiling water to the intro section. | ||
As you can see, all of my edits were very minor and trivial (in my opinion). [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 21:58, 12 December 2011 (UTC) | |||
:The major additions made to the article (as of this date) by Henry Padlecklas are useful, well written and should be included in the current re-approval. However, the section he plans on researching, writing and adding in the future (exactly when is not known) will probably call for another re-approval at that time. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 00:34, 18 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::As discussed on the article's Talk page, I made a minor revision to the lede to comply with comments by Sandy Harris and Peter Schmitt. Peter Schmitt also made a minor lede revision. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 00:34, 18 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
:::I also made some minor formatting changes to the LaTeX equation and its parameters to comply with comments from Peter Jackson. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 00:34, 18 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
=== Author: [[User: Henry A. Padleckas| Henry A. Padleckas]] === | |||
=== Peter Schmitt === | |||
The changes made to the approved versions are minor revisions and improvements that do not affect its scientific content. | |||
I recommend approval. --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 11:34, 30 December 2011 (UTC) | |||
The introduction has been revised and now explains why the "naive" layman's definition is not correct. | |||
Henry A. Padleckas has added two sections that discuss the boiling point of compounds and mixtures. | |||
They are a useful addition. I recommend approval of the expanded version. | |||
(My university education included the foundations of physics.) --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 23:07, 20 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
=== Approval Manager === | |||
I certified approval of this draft after judging the lead author's responses to comments and to changes to the text to be satisfactory. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 01:47, 7 March 2012 (UTC) | |||
I updated the certified version after satisfactory minor edits by the lead author. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 02:00, 7 March 2012 (UTC) | |||
:I again updated the version url, to include Henry's diagram, an excellent addition having the lead author's blessing. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 19:05, 8 March 2012 (UTC) | |||
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Latest revision as of 20:15, 8 March 2012
| Howard C. Berkowitz nominated the version dated December 27, 2008, 01:00 (ET, GMT-5) of this article for approval. The Engineering Workgroup, Chemistry Workgroup and Physics Workgroup oversaw this approval and the article was approved on, or around, January 3, 2009. |
Approval of an updated version
Author: Milton Beychok
These are the minor (almost trivial) changes made since the article was approved:
- (1) On Feb. 21, 2009; Apr. 17, 2010; and May 1, 2011, I added internal wiki links to other CZ articles.
- (2) On Sept. 11, 2009, I added these three words to a sentence naming the Clausius-Clapeyron equation: "this form of".
- (3) On August 11, 2011, I replaced an inactive external hyper-link with an active one.
- (4) On On Sept. 21, 2010, I improved the vapor pressure chart by placing small black circles on the chart to emphasize the boiling points.
- Then, a few day ago, I added the new photo of boiling water to the intro section.
As you can see, all of my edits were very minor and trivial (in my opinion). Milton Beychok 21:58, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
- The major additions made to the article (as of this date) by Henry Padlecklas are useful, well written and should be included in the current re-approval. However, the section he plans on researching, writing and adding in the future (exactly when is not known) will probably call for another re-approval at that time. Milton Beychok 00:34, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- As discussed on the article's Talk page, I made a minor revision to the lede to comply with comments by Sandy Harris and Peter Schmitt. Peter Schmitt also made a minor lede revision. Milton Beychok 00:34, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- I also made some minor formatting changes to the LaTeX equation and its parameters to comply with comments from Peter Jackson. Milton Beychok 00:34, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
Author: Henry A. Padleckas
Peter Schmitt
The changes made to the approved versions are minor revisions and improvements that do not affect its scientific content. I recommend approval. --Peter Schmitt 11:34, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
The introduction has been revised and now explains why the "naive" layman's definition is not correct.
Henry A. Padleckas has added two sections that discuss the boiling point of compounds and mixtures. They are a useful addition. I recommend approval of the expanded version.
(My university education included the foundations of physics.) --Peter Schmitt 23:07, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
Approval Manager
I certified approval of this draft after judging the lead author's responses to comments and to changes to the text to be satisfactory. Anthony.Sebastian 01:47, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
I updated the certified version after satisfactory minor edits by the lead author. Anthony.Sebastian 02:00, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
- I again updated the version url, to include Henry's diagram, an excellent addition having the lead author's blessing. Anthony.Sebastian 19:05, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
| Anthony.Sebastian nominated the version dated 01:03, 7 March 2012 of this article for approval. The Engineering Workgroup, Chemistry Workgroup and Physics Workgroup oversaw this approval and the article was approved on, or around, March 08, 2012. |