Talk:Diabetes (disambiguation): Difference between revisions

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[[User:Trevor Walker|Trevor Walker]] 21:03, 9 March 2008 (CDT)
[[User:Trevor Walker|Trevor Walker]] 21:03, 9 March 2008 (CDT)


Excellent!  Any rewriting of articles so they are more approachable and useful to our target audience is greatly welcome.  Cf. [[CZ:Article Mechanics|Article Mechanics]] (and the long version thereof) for further tips. --[[User:Larry Sanger|Larry Sanger]] 21:09, 9 March 2008 (CDT)
Excellent!  Any rewriting of articles so they are more approachable and useful to our target audience is greatly welcome.  Cf. [[CZ:Article mechanics|Article Mechanics]] (and the long version thereof) for further tips. --[[User:Larry Sanger|Larry Sanger]] 21:09, 9 March 2008 (CDT)

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Hi Folks I thought I would work through the diabetes articles to make them more relevant to a general audience. At the moment they have a medical textbook feel. If there are no objections I will start at the diabetes disambiguation page and include a link to a new page 'diabetes mellitus' on which we can include aspects that are common to both type one and type two. Trevor Walker 21:03, 9 March 2008 (CDT)

Excellent! Any rewriting of articles so they are more approachable and useful to our target audience is greatly welcome. Cf. Article Mechanics (and the long version thereof) for further tips. --Larry Sanger 21:09, 9 March 2008 (CDT)