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From the lead, an uninformed reader would not guess that the Palestinian authority has no actual control over Gaza. Even reading further, I suspect that many would fail the grasp this essential point. We need some clearer exposition of this. Also some key dates would be helpful in the lead: I don't recall which are the crucial ones, so this needs a bit of research. [[User:Martin Baldwin-Edwards|Martin Baldwin-Edwards]] 19:09, 28 October 2010 (UTC) |
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From the lead, an uninformed reader would not guess that the Palestinian authority has no actual control over Gaza. Even reading further, I suspect that many would fail the grasp this essential point. We need some clearer exposition of this. Also some key dates would be helpful in the lead: I don't recall which are the crucial ones, so this needs a bit of research. Martin Baldwin-Edwards 19:09, 28 October 2010 (UTC)