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''See also [[Talk: Occupied Territories]], but please comment here on the issues raised, not there.'' | |||
From the lead, an uninformed reader would not guess that the Palestinian authority has no actual control over Gaza. Even reading further, I suspect that many would fail the grasp this essential point. We need some clearer exposition of this. Also some key dates would be helpful in the lead: I don't recall which are the crucial ones, so this needs a bit of research. [[User:Martin Baldwin-Edwards|Martin Baldwin-Edwards]] 19:09, 28 October 2010 (UTC) | From the lead, an uninformed reader would not guess that the Palestinian authority has no actual control over Gaza. Even reading further, I suspect that many would fail the grasp this essential point. We need some clearer exposition of this. Also some key dates would be helpful in the lead: I don't recall which are the crucial ones, so this needs a bit of research. [[User:Martin Baldwin-Edwards|Martin Baldwin-Edwards]] 19:09, 28 October 2010 (UTC) | ||
Latest revision as of 01:57, 29 October 2010
See also Talk: Occupied Territories, but please comment here on the issues raised, not there.
From the lead, an uninformed reader would not guess that the Palestinian authority has no actual control over Gaza. Even reading further, I suspect that many would fail the grasp this essential point. We need some clearer exposition of this. Also some key dates would be helpful in the lead: I don't recall which are the crucial ones, so this needs a bit of research. Martin Baldwin-Edwards 19:09, 28 October 2010 (UTC)