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The word "people" is used three times in the first two sentences, in each case with a slightly different meaning. Couldn't this be improved? [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 21:54, 28 June 2008 (CDT) | The word "people" is used three times in the first two sentences, in each case with a slightly different meaning. Couldn't this be improved? [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 21:54, 28 June 2008 (CDT) | ||
: Done. It is now de-people-ised. --[[User:Tom Morris|Tom Morris]] 03:46, 29 June 2008 (CDT) | |||
::And very nicely, too! Thanks, [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 10:16, 29 June 2008 (CDT) |
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People, and not the magazine
The word "people" is used three times in the first two sentences, in each case with a slightly different meaning. Couldn't this be improved? Hayford Peirce 21:54, 28 June 2008 (CDT)
- Done. It is now de-people-ised. --Tom Morris 03:46, 29 June 2008 (CDT)
- And very nicely, too! Thanks, Hayford Peirce 10:16, 29 June 2008 (CDT)