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Hi Debra, let's do Salmonella enterica, but you can certainly mention its most famous pathovar (sub-species) typhi. --[[User:John J. Dennehy|John J. Dennehy]] 07:43, 7 March 2008 (CST)
Hi Debra, let's do Salmonella enterica, but you can certainly mention its most famous pathovar (sub-species) typhi. --[[User:John J. Dennehy|John J. Dennehy]] 07:43, 7 March 2008 (CST)
==  Rough draft progress report ==
Good start Debra. Some suggestions:
-Go thru and put double brackets around proper nouns and terminology that you think might deserve a page of their own. Use the ab underline tool. I did this for 1st section.
-the paragraphs are dense. can you break up into smaller chunks and maybe use sub-sub-headings?
--[[User:John J. Dennehy|John J. Dennehy]] 09:22, 3 April 2008 (CDT)

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Hi Debra, let's do Salmonella enterica, but you can certainly mention its most famous pathovar (sub-species) typhi. --John J. Dennehy 07:43, 7 March 2008 (CST)

Rough draft progress report

Good start Debra. Some suggestions:

-Go thru and put double brackets around proper nouns and terminology that you think might deserve a page of their own. Use the ab underline tool. I did this for 1st section.

-the paragraphs are dense. can you break up into smaller chunks and maybe use sub-sub-headings?

--John J. Dennehy 09:22, 3 April 2008 (CDT)