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What's with all the parenthesis added throughout this article. Especially in the introduction, it makes the article read like a scratched record. Can this info either be incorporated into the prose in a less disjointed manor or deleted. [[User:Derek Harkness|Derek Harkness]] 04:39, 8 November 2007 (CST)
What's with all the parenthesis added throughout this article. Especially in the introduction, it makes the article read like a scratched record. Can this info either be incorporated into the prose in a less disjointed manor or deleted. [[User:Derek Harkness|Derek Harkness]] 04:39, 8 November 2007 (CST)
:I agree with Derek, it needs to be expanded to not read like this. --[[User:Robert W King|Robert W King]] 07:34, 8 November 2007 (CST)

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 Definition:  A distilled alcoholic beverage consisting of a clear liquid comprising mostly water and ethanol purified by distillation from a fermented substance, usually grain. [d] [e]
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As amusing as the story is, it just doesn't seem like something that should be included in the articlespace. See Talk:Maple_Syrup for a similar situation. --Robert W King 21:22, 7 November 2007 (CST)

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What's with all the parenthesis added throughout this article. Especially in the introduction, it makes the article read like a scratched record. Can this info either be incorporated into the prose in a less disjointed manor or deleted. Derek Harkness 04:39, 8 November 2007 (CST)

I agree with Derek, it needs to be expanded to not read like this. --Robert W King 07:34, 8 November 2007 (CST)
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