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This is essentially the first couple of paragraphs from the Wikipedia article, along with some other info, ALL of which I originally wrote for Wikipedia.  The CZ version, therefore, is all my own words. [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 16:11, 5 September 2007 (CDT)
This is essentially the first couple of paragraphs from the Wikipedia article, along with some other info, ALL of which I originally wrote for Wikipedia.  The CZ version, therefore, is all my own words. [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 16:11, 5 September 2007 (CDT)
: Seeing as how you are a much better wordsmith than I, I think somehow rewording the first paragraph/sentence to link to the [[Rodgers and Hammerstein]] article would be good.  Perhaps not even mention them as individuals?  Just a thought. --[[User:Todd Coles|Todd Coles]] 16:24, 5 September 2007 (CDT)
: Seeing as how you are a much better wordsmith than I, I think somehow rewording the first paragraph/sentence to link to the [[Rodgers and Hammerstein]] article would be good.  Perhaps not even mention them as individuals?  Just a thought. --[[User:Todd Coles|Todd Coles]] 16:24, 5 September 2007 (CDT)
::I dunno about the wordsmithing, hehe, but I am gonna do your suggestion in a few minutes -- I had already been mulling it over. [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 16:32, 5 September 2007 (CDT)

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Article Checklist for "South Pacific (musical)"
Workgroup category or categories Theater Workgroup, Music Workgroup [Please add or review categories]
Article status Developing article: beyond a stub, but incomplete
Underlinked article? Yes
Basic cleanup done? Yes
Checklist last edited by Hayford Peirce 16:10, 5 September 2007 (CDT)

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This is essentially the first couple of paragraphs from the Wikipedia article, along with some other info, ALL of which I originally wrote for Wikipedia. The CZ version, therefore, is all my own words. Hayford Peirce 16:11, 5 September 2007 (CDT)

Seeing as how you are a much better wordsmith than I, I think somehow rewording the first paragraph/sentence to link to the Rodgers and Hammerstein article would be good. Perhaps not even mention them as individuals? Just a thought. --Todd Coles 16:24, 5 September 2007 (CDT)
I dunno about the wordsmithing, hehe, but I am gonna do your suggestion in a few minutes -- I had already been mulling it over. Hayford Peirce 16:32, 5 September 2007 (CDT)
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