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==I need someone to neutralise this==
I think there is some bias in this article which literally poured out of me as I wrote it. The major issues here are:
A) Government economic policy was not favourable to disaster relief - does my wording need changing?
B) The Catholic Churches well documented lack of active relief work - Am I being a bit too harsh here?
There are others as well, so it may need some altering here and there (Never mind several grammer mistakes I'm seeing everywhere) [[User:Denis Cavanagh|Denis Cavanagh]] 12:51, 2 September 2007 (CDT)

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I need someone to neutralise this

I think there is some bias in this article which literally poured out of me as I wrote it. The major issues here are:

A) Government economic policy was not favourable to disaster relief - does my wording need changing?

B) The Catholic Churches well documented lack of active relief work - Am I being a bit too harsh here?

There are others as well, so it may need some altering here and there (Never mind several grammer mistakes I'm seeing everywhere) Denis Cavanagh 12:51, 2 September 2007 (CDT)